Before I had any right to dismiss Twihards or criticize the psychologically unhealthy relationship model that Bella Swan and Edward Cullen present, I felt obliged to read the books. So I did. All four novels, one novella, and an incomplete document in portable format. The content lived down to my expectations, but I was unprepared for how poorly crafted the saga is. Contact:

23rd June 2011

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Tagged: commathetical mishapcomma abusecommatheticalDoes ''my muffin'' sound like a euphemism to anyone else?Bella's chestThis was worse than any fantasy-romance book.

14th May 2011

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Tagged: reduxarccommathetical mishapcommatheticaleducationPunctuation Abusecopy editing

11th February 2011

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Tagged: commatheticalcopy editdon't make serial commas where only asides exist.

2nd October 2010

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Tagged: not everything is about bellashiny foreheadscommatheticalTwilight