Before I had any right to dismiss Twihards or criticize the psychologically unhealthy relationship model that Bella Swan and Edward Cullen present, I felt obliged to read the books. So I did. All four novels, one novella, and an incomplete document in portable format. The content lived down to my expectations, but I was unprepared for how poorly crafted the saga is. Contact: reasoningwithvampires@gmail.com

26th April 2011

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Tagged: You're killin' me, Smalls.Sentences are not minivans!Was there a shortage of periods? Couldn't spare an extra capital letter to start a new sentence?and then...?grammarunintended consquences of sloppy writingwasn't that easy?p265