Before I had any right to dismiss Twihards or criticize the psychologically unhealthy relationship model that Bella Swan and Edward Cullen present, I felt obliged to read the books. So I did. All four novels, one novella, and an incomplete document in portable format. The content lived down to my expectations, but I was unprepared for how poorly crafted the saga is. Contact: reasoningwithvampires@gmail.com

6th August 2011

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Tagged: You could start a new sentence, yanno.Bella is our only hope.really? her?Dashing through the sludge...And it doesn't have to be with a conjunction.I don't think you thought that through.

31st July 2011

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Tagged: Her eyelashes are the language center of her brain.thinking is hard.Dashing through the sludge...The independent clauses are related but not so much that they need to be in the same sentence.

27th July 2011

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Tagged: What a co-dependent mess, I thought.Dashing through the sludge...This book makes me vomit -- metaphorically.

28th June 2011

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Tagged: Dashing through the sludge...comma abuseIt's tidier.

25th June 2011

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Tagged: Dashing through the sludge...Punctuation AbuseI'm also poorly disguising the resentment in my tone.1 Writing Rule: Make sense.writingpunctuation

23rd January 2011

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Tagged: For the love of all that sparkles, stop interrupting yourselfInterrupting Cow-mooo!Dashing through the sludge...