Before I had any right to dismiss Twihards or criticize the psychologically unhealthy relationship model that Bella Swan and Edward Cullen present, I felt obliged to read the books. So I did. All four novels, one novella, and an incomplete document in portable format. The content lived down to my expectations, but I was unprepared for how poorly crafted the saga is. Contact: reasoningwithvampires@gmail.com

23rd September 2012

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Tagged: ''Whatever'' Dana accused.Awkward phrasingDialogue TagsShe wrote that with a straight face.Wonder of wonders -- I challenged you to do something in this post without labeling it and you still knew what was going on.you're doing it wrong.When you reblog the typo it's like getting the limited edition.

19th September 2012

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Tagged: Awkward phrasingCare bears are an asthma attack waiting to happen.Edward was right! Werewolves are dangerous!It sounds cuter than it is.unintended consquences of sloppy writing

15th February 2011

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Tagged: Awkward phrasingNot wrong. /Awkward/.copy editing