Before I had any right to dismiss Twihards or criticize the psychologically unhealthy relationship model that Bella Swan and Edward Cullen present, I felt obliged to read the books. So I did. All four novels, one novella, and an incomplete document in portable format. The content lived down to my expectations, but I was unprepared for how poorly crafted the saga is. Contact: reasoningwithvampires@gmail.com

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Tagged: Dashing through the sludge...Punctuation AbuseI'm also poorly disguising the resentment in my tone.1 Writing Rule: Make sense.writingpunctuation

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    Um, has anyone noticed the bigger, more basic problem with this passage? THE “H” IN “HE” SHOULD NOT BE CAPITALIZED IF IT...
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    YES. The battle of the em-dash has been won. Now, we will spread to the greater world and solve the problem of the...
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    Maybe it’s the editor’s doing? In a comparison with one Advanced Reading Copy, you can see the editor dealing with two...
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    agreed content not punctuation makes a good story punctuation is lame
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    oh yes this is my commentary to the entire book i wish to marry whoever wrote this
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