Meyer’s not the only one whose license I’d like to revoke…blah proofreading.
I can only imagine her eyes “plunging through the now-black forest like wraiths”. Sounds like a movie I’d like to see.
And it could have been fixed so easily, too! “…the others close on his heels. They plunged through the now-black forest...
Also, jumping from a sentence describing how Bella’s eyes wouldn’t close to a description of something else entirely...
pahaha… just one teeny-tiny example of the grammatical earthquake that is stephanie meyer.