Before I had any right to dismiss Twihards or criticize the psychologically unhealthy relationship model that Bella Swan and Edward Cullen present, I felt obliged to read the books. So I did. All four novels, one novella, and an incomplete document in portable format. The content lived down to my expectations, but I was unprepared for how poorly crafted the saga is. Contact:

22nd May 2014

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Anonymous said: I'm really glad you're back but I'm rather concerned. Though your latest post was funny and snarky it ended with "Isn't that a charming meet cute?". Your "sentence" needs help.

I’m not sure what you mean. Maybe I have authorial blindness, that is to say I cannot see the mistake because I continue reading what I know I meant and unconsciously edit my writing (which is a major reason you should let other people help you edit).

Otherwise, I suspect you are unfamiliar with the term “meet cute” and maybe you see a weird verb and adjective with something distinctly missing.

In any case, I’m going to take this opportunity to poll readers. Should meet cute/meet-cute be hyphenated? I debated it for about five minutes before opting out.

9th May 2014

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5th February 2014

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Tagged: Hello darlings.Awkward phrasingshame carrots and other hand gesturesMeanwhile the cliffs were doing jazz hands.The number of times I've needed to put this book down in order to flip it off with both hands is astounding.EVEN THE LANDSCAPE HATES YOUThey look like big good strong hands don't they? I always thought that's what they were...

22nd July 2013

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13th July 2013

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26th May 2013

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24th May 2013

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Tagged: Agreeing with Bella Swan makes me uncomfortableoh the inanityIf you don't like it you're free to find another planet.Apparently it's the kind of world where stalking is cute.

23rd May 2013

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19th February 2013

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21st January 2013

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20th January 2013

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Since I know a lot of you share my love for fonts…

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20th January 2013

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8th January 2013

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19th December 2012

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4th December 2012

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